Fight back posted 4th May 2014, 1:13 PM
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Fight back



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Xamag


how do you action

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Lina


I think you do it pretty dang well imho! That last panel is just so great ahhh <3

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rufiangel


Don't get me wrong, this page is absolutely stunning (as your stuff always is) but since you asked...

I'm still working on my own action technique but I reckon some mangling of lineart (in place of putting in action lines if you don't like that sort of thing), some well-placed motion blurs at varying opacities and flying embers (since this is fire we're dealing with here) might add some movement.

But I feel a little blushy telling you how to do anything really lol

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Chivi-chivik


It's better to make some motion lines instead of blurs in this case. :)

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LMB


It looks great! Something tells me that she might be a bit naive lol.

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cattservant


Could be and is diverge in the woods

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Erupan


Зайчик мой, Ты такая талантливая <3 (I GOOGLED SOME RUSSIAN I HAVE NO IDEA HOW TO EVEN READ THAT) you continue to whoop ass with your bodacious comic and characters and colors. UwU The sound effect on the fire is really clever and so are the design of the animals hhhwww <3<3

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Xamag


Stop being so sweet arghjjksf

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Erupan


nnnnnhhhhuhuhu no bb<3 ;u

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Reader


Hhhhhhhh this is so kick ass and I love how Dolly is so gentle and loving. You don't get many well written but genuinely caring characters anymore.

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DecoyDreamer


AAaaaah...this is awesome. Shawn is a cold hard baddie.

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Minchan


Only hugs, Shawn! :<

And Dolly <3 You're so adorable >w<

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Victor


Shawn, you are a bundle of sticks, straw and cloth playing with fire. You should put it down and get the butt out of there.

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Black Legacy


Yeah that's nice Dorothy.
But i think Shawn's got the right idea here maybe?

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PandaRum


Hugs - the hippie answer to all of life's problems.

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Fractal


Headcannon: Shawn has an Irish accent.

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DecoyDreamer


I actually agree with that! >w<

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BAKAnnabubs


Wow I can actually hear it now.

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King


I love how Shawn has a way better sense of self preservation than Dorothy does. She just sees the world as happy and like nothing bad is going to happen. So cute.

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???


Shawn is the coolest scarecrow ever.

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neuroticAlien


I second that

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Ech


That flow of the fire tho

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DecoyDreamer


And let me guess...Nick comes to the rescue??? Because if he does, were gonna see some wood-choppin' action!

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KatieM


I love it!

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Scarlet


I may or may not be romantically attracted to a scarecrow

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neuroticAlien


That makes the two of us

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