Room posted 27th Jan 2013, 8:18 PM

Note: You can't click on a flash file to get to the next page. Click on the "Next" button instead to keep reading!



author comments


Xamag


Explore the room! There're 28 clickable objects in general. Some of them are meaningful and others are silly, that's for you to guess.

For those who can't find the 'next' arrow: just change '/comics/6' to '/comics/7' in the URL, we'll fix that eventually.

edit delete


Xamag


RUS
Ага, хомяк вот соберется с духом и запилит все надписи сюда
Когда-нибудь

edit delete




user comments


GigaNerd17


Are you &&&&ing serious? An interactive comic?!

Color me amazed. O_O

edit delete reply


CyberSkull


I'm all for expanding the scope of storytelling, but dammit, why Flash?

edit delete reply


Xamag


This comic is my first experiment with other mediums. Nursery Garden was done by another person, I have no skill in such things (I barely have skills for Flash -_-). Besides, giving an outgoing link for every interactive page is not very comfortable :)

edit delete reply


TheDreamerRuckus


Flash
This is really cool.

edit delete reply


mouselad


absolutely amazing... I am wigging out.. sooo cool.

edit delete reply


13blackhats


Sweet jesus this is amazing.

edit delete reply


Fabhar


I can't see the option to move on to the next page.

edit delete reply


Kay


Yes but how do I leave the room?

edit delete reply


Xamag


You don't need to leave it, only explore :>

edit delete reply


Sarah


but we can't find the option to move on to the next page

edit delete reply


Xamag


Hmm? Is something wrong with the 'next' button? :v

edit delete reply


Vescar


Not per se, but the flash is bigger than the normal strip and your page doesn't resize, so the "next" button seems to disappear behind the flash, unclickable.
Still a great idea, I think it would be even better if the mouse changed in any way as soon as it's over a clickable object. Keep up the good work :)

edit delete reply


Xamag


Ah, is that so! Well, I'll see what we can do, as soon as my friend has an opportunity to work again UvU

edit delete reply


Glew


You can't tell when comments were posted. Was this discussion a long time ago? Because I still can't find a link to the next page :S A bit discouraging at the beginning of a comic. Good luck I already got hooked ;)

edit delete reply


Savvy


I love all the little references in the book titles/authors! They made me smile, haha. ^u^ Also, your colors are absolutely gorgeous!

edit delete reply


deadnotsleeping


I like how the aunt and uncle are sporting shutter shades shades.

I like all of it, actually.

edit delete reply


The_Rippy_One


I liked that photo..until I was disturbed by her aunt's absolute lack of ribs...

edit delete reply


Umbrie


"Lonely People" by E. Rigby, "Slumberland" by L. Nemo... "Special Place" by J. Sunderland? Done. x3

edit delete reply


Lo'sLand


i cant find the last item ;A;

edit delete reply


Taiyomi


Queen
I can't find 28 clickable objects. I've only found 17 !!!!! how am I supposed to go on?

edit delete reply


Britarse


Great!
Amazing artwork and a cute interactive device. The books belong in Lucien's library from Sandman!

edit delete reply


Flents


What the ..
This is...BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

edit delete reply


Klow


Interesting!
Would be even better with some music and/or sound effects, with small animations too (like character breathing, hair moving, cat tail moving). I understand this is not your domain, but I was putting the idea out there :)

Ergonomy though, the room is not user friendly. There is no indication anywhere of what the purpose of the flash is or what I should be looking for. If I hadn't read the comments, I never would have known there were several interactions to be had here. Perhaps a mouseover visual and/or "items to be discovered" counter would help defining the purpose.

Additionnaly, I know the missing "next page" button has already been mentionned, but I think it is urgent to fix. If my friend hadn't given me reason to believe she had read more than this, I would have thought this page to be the last update and quickly leave the comic. The only way to go to the next page is through the archive. Most new readers may stop here as well and leave without looking.

Good work though, the artwork is refreshing!

edit delete reply


lignee'


reader
how do i get past the interactive page?

edit delete reply


Museia


How did you put this interactive thing in there? Is it Flash?
I've always wanted to do an interactive comic, but how did you put this in here? I didn't know you could do that. Wow.

This comic is utterly amazing and I'm really looking forward to how the story goes. I've subscribed :D

edit delete reply


Xamag


It's flash, comicfury supports this format, which is pretty awesome. Thanks!

edit delete reply


Domino


I love how it is interactive but how do I get on to the next page? there is no 'next' button?

edit delete reply



Post a comment!

average rating: 4.75